• Moliere
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    Hello and welcome to the Philosophy Writing Challenge - June 2025.

    This is an opportunity to submit your own philosophical writing as 'essays' to be read and commented on by other members. Similar to the Literary Activity, the emphasis is on participation and sharing and exploring our creative philosophical side together.

    A separate discussion thread will be posted 'Meet the Authors'. A list of authors will be provided for the 'guessing game'.

    After the authors are revealed on June 16th the authors can:
    1. Respond to the comments and feedback.
    2. Join in the general discussion, compare and contrast other essays. Note: authors, as readers, can comment on specific essays before this

    We have some guidelines for participation:

    1) Anyone can enter. Entries can be PMed to me.
    2) Max one submission per member.
    3) A minimum of 500 words to a maximum of 5000 words.
    4) Must fall under the broad category of a philosophical essay. The Essay's Title and Topic are chosen by the author. The philosophical viewpoint can be academic or less formal. It should be systematic with an Introduction, Main Body and Conclusion. This is non-fiction. Poetic expression is allowed if it completes or supports the philosophical exploration.
    5) Submissions are to be anonymous. Don't advertise what you've written.
    6) Entries must not be previously available online, or in print form.
    7) Entries will be posted as discussion OPs and may be commented upon.
    8) Deadline for submissions is May 31st 23:59 GMT
    9) All entries will be posted on June 1st.
    10) Members please carefully read the essays before offering thoughtful feedback. A more open-ended conversation will take place in the 'Meet the Authors' thread that will be created on June 15th.
    11) No AI (except for proofreading). There isn't anything to win so you'd only be hurting yourself anyways since the point of the exercise is to stretch our creative powers together.


    Formatting:
    If you care about formatting, please send a pastebin link rather than text. If you send text, the formatting will be lost when the story is copy-pasted into its post. Here is a video tutorial followed by verbal instructions:



    To use pastebin the author needs to send the link to me via PM, which requires nothing more than pasting in the box and clicking the create button underneath. Then tick "unlisted" so the essay isn't discoverable. PM me the link and I'll utilize that in posting your essay.

    Please post any further questions or comments you have in the discussion below.

    Thank you. Looking forward to reading all submissions and feedback. Enjoy!

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    EDIT:

    Resources were requested for help on what exactly an academic philosophy essay should look like, and provided by @Amity so I've appended them here:

    https://philosophy.tamucc.edu/graphics/berkich/texts/james-lenman-how-to-write-a-crap-philosophy-essay.pdf

    https://philosophy.tamucc.edu/graphics/berkich/texts/james-pryor-guidelines-on-writing-a-philosophy-paper.pdf

    https://www.southampton.ac.uk/~assets/doc/University_life/learning_teaching/posing_the_question.pdf

    See also:

    My advice would be to start with a concise paragraph expressing the point of the essay. Then sketch out headings and sub-headings, representing the progressive stages of building the argument and the steps required to establish each step. That step of building level 1, 2 and 3 headings is often helpful in structuring your content.

    Also consider likely objections and your counter to them.

    End with a conclusion which should state the paragraph you started with but now as a conclusion based on the preceding paragraphs.
    Wayfarer

    For a fast guide on structuring the essay.
  • Amity
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    Really great to see this challenge up and running. Thanks to you and everyone who supported this new TPF adventure :cool:

    For those who weren't at the beginning of this, you can read it here:
    https://thephilosophyforum.com/discussion/15596/tpf-philosophy-competitionactivity-2025-/p1

    I hope everyone enjoys! :flower:
  • Amity
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    @Moliere - thank you again for writing such a comprehensive and helpful OP for this activity.

    We owe so much to @Baden and the Literary Activity team. They provided the basic core which evolved over the years to showcase and encourage the imagination and creativity of members. Fantastic job, well done! :fire:

    In a way, it was/is easier than this one. For example, I'm thinking of Guideline 4.

    4) Must fall under the broad category of a philosophical essay. The Essay's Title and Topic are chosen by the author. The philosophical viewpoint can be academic or less formal. It should be systematic with an Introduction, Main Body and Conclusion. This is non-fiction. Poetic expression is allowed if it completes or supports the philosophical exploration.Moliere

    If memory serves, in the Lit. Activity, the broad category was 'a story'.
    Even then, there were times when an entry was questioned. This is not a story.
    And evaluated accordingly.

    I think this is where imaginative writing can be stifled. If the mind is closed or wary of going beyond the traditional. Not branching out to meet the sky and sun.
    To think outside the box.

    And so, it might be the case with 'philosophy writing'.
    And even opening it up as 'Philosophy for All' brings some difficulties and interesting questions.

    Is it indeed 'non-fiction'? Well, yes and no.
    Isn't everything we write a story? Part of a bigger process...

    I'd love to hear your thoughts on this.
    In writing a philosophy piece, where do you think the boundaries lie or how far can thoughts fly.

    I think writing an 'essay' takes much more time and serious thought, hence the early February announcement. Stories can be written in a day! And I guess some experienced philosophers already have a few tucked away in their sock drawer. But hey, this is a chance to be a 'new' you!
    Toss out the worn and grey...become fresh and stripey. Turn the kaleidoscope for a new pattern :cool:
  • Amity
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    Is it indeed 'non-fiction'?Amity

    Even as someone who helped draft this, I still have questions...
  • Jack Cummins
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    With the guidelines I am wondering how the entries are going to be different from thread topics. It may simply be that many are longer and less of raising a question. Also, the creative aspects may get lost if it becomes too academic. The guidelines specify poetry only being used as illustration, but it is unclear if the use of fiction can be used at all and to what extent. That is because the division between fiction and non fiction is far from absolute.
  • Amity
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    With the guidelines I am wondering how the entries are going to be different from thread topics. It may simply be that many are longer and less of raising a questionJack Cummins

    Yes. This question was raised before. I think you are not alone in wondering what is the point?
    We already have 'philosophy writing'. From the original discussion:

    The difference being between a post and this is an essay, so I'd expect some kind of complete thought or argument. Whereas with a post I only expect enough of a topic to get a conversation going, I'd think that an essay actually completes a thought or presents a whole argument or tells a story or is in some sense a self-contained peice of writing meant to be presented as a whole for a reader.

    Whereas a thread can do that, it's really just about having a conversation at all and needn't conclude or be self-contained and can wander more.
    Moliere

    The difference:

    A typical discussion thread involves the author right from the get go.
    This can affect the responses. The author also has to maintain the thread, responding directly, sometime immediately to other participants.

    Here, the anonymous essay, article or philosophy writing is read and evaluated without bias. The focus is on the ideas and how well they are expressed. How they are understood or interpreted.

    Feedback is given by readers and other authors.
    A conversation takes place without input/interference by the author.
    Until...The Reveal!
    Amity

    Also, the creative aspects may get lost if it becomes too academic.Jack Cummins

    Even academic essays use imagination and creativity. Think 'thought experiments' and use of 'myths', continuing questions from different perspectives.
    The style and format chosen gives voice to the individual's ideas and views.

    The guidelines specify poetry only being used as illustration, but it is unclear if the use of fiction can be used at all and to what extent.Jack Cummins

    Poetic expression is allowed if it completes or supports the philosophical exploration.Moliere

    I agree this can be clarified. I played a part in the confusion. Go figure! :smile:
    I know that a poem can be seen as a piece of philosophical writing but uncertain as to the balance.

    I think in this activity, it perhaps should be given background and context in an Introduction?
    The main thing is to make the philosophical point clear, no? To follow an idea through...to a conclusion.
    Even if that means there is no conclusion but more questions! Or responses...

    That is because the division between fiction and non fiction is far from absolute.Jack Cummins

    Indeed. I'm glad we are having this discussion to explore and clarify meaning.
    Some authors, like Iris Murdoch, made a clear distinction between their philosophy and novels.
  • Amity
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    I admit to not knowing much of Wittgenstein. However, when I was searching for 'poetry as philosophical writing', I found this:

    His disposition,” Bertrand Russell wrote of the young Wittgenstein in 1912 , “is that of an artist, intuitive and moody” (cited in Monk 1990 , 43 ). A similar judgment was made some fifteen years later by Rudolf Carnap in Vienna:

    His point of view and his attitude toward people and problems . . . were much more similar to those of a creative artist than to those of a scientist; one might almost say similar to those of a religious prophet or a seer. When he started to formulate his view on some specific philosophical problem, we often felt the internal struggle that occurred in him at that very moment, a struggle by which he tried to penetrate from darkness to light under an intense and painful strain…. When finally, sometimes after a prolonged and arduous effort, his answer came forth, his statement stood before us like a newly created piece of art or a divine revelation. (Monk 1990 , 244)

    And Wittgenstein himself, hoping, in 1919, to persuade Ludwig von Ficker, the editor of the literary journal Der Brenner, to publish his controversial Tractatus Logico-Philosophicus , remarked, “The work is strictly philosophical and at the same time literary” ( Monk 1990 , 177 ).
    Writing Philosophy as Poetry: Literary Form in Wittgenstein

    Just one example...
  • Amity
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    Above all:
    It should be an exciting interaction, weaving questions, responses and trying to understand the meaning of the text. Of mutual benefit in a positive engagement.Amity
  • Amity
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    Poetry and philosophy overlap in many areas. Poetry is concerned with the exploration of human experience: the physical and metaphysical world, issues of ethics and morality, universal questions about existence, knowledge and meaning; reaching for transcendental or universal truths; and so does philosophy.

    Poetry and philosophy both place a high value on the precise use of language: philosophers strive for clarity and rigour in their arguments, while poets often seek to evoke emotions and imagery. Both use metaphor, ambiguity and symbolism to convey meanings and appreciate the power of form to convey complex ideas, emotions and aesthetics. [...]

    Several philosophers have also been poets, contributing significantly to both fields. Notable examples include Plato (c. 427–347 BCE), Rumi (1207–1273), the Indian polymath, Rabindranath Tagore (1861–1941), Fernando Pessoa (1888–1935), the Portuguese poet whose work blends poetry with existential and metaphysical themes, T.S. Eliot (1888–1965), and Kahlil Gibran (1883–1931) the Lebanese writer, poet and philosopher best known for The Prophet.
    At the intersection of philosophy and poetic inquiry - Bera

    ***

    I'd like to draw attention to the highly creative philosophical contributions of @PoeticUniverse.

    From 2 recent discussions:
    1. Tao follows Nature - started by @Arcane Sandwich.
    https://thephilosophyforum.com/discussion/15720/tao-follows-nature/p1

    Excerpt:
    The Manifestation

    Through endless transmutation’s flowing dance,
    The Eternal dons ten thousand changing forms,
    Like one great ocean lifting countless waves,
    Or single sky spawning infinite storms.

    Each temporal thing that rises from its depths
    Bears witness to that which forever stays,
    A momentary expression of the whole,
    A fleeting actor in eternal plays.
    Poetic Universe


    2. What exactly is Process Philosophy? - started by @Darkneos.
    https://thephilosophyforum.com/discussion/15737/what-exactly-is-process-philosophy/p1

    Excerpt:

    A Conversation with the Great Lama
    (Who lives near me)
    On Reality and Illusion

    “Lama, I’ve heard that this world isn’t real,
    That all we perceive is mere illusion’s deal—
    That rain isn’t wet, and pain doesn’t hurt,
    And nothing that seems to exist is quite real.”

    “Indeed, that’s the teaching passed down through time,
    That reality’s nature is more sublime
    Than what our senses tell us is true.
    Tell me, does this help when your problems climb?”

    “Well, Lama, I’ve tried to see through the veil,
    To treat life’s hard knocks as just details that fail
    To pierce the true nature of ultimate truth—
    But hunger still hungers, and storms still assail.

    “The sunrise still wakes me, the night makes me sleep,
    My heart still can love, and my eyes still can weep,
    Each moment feels solid, each pain cuts as sharp
    As if this illusion weren’t merely skin-deep.”

    “You speak what you find with admirable sight.
    The world does persist, through both day and night,
    Appearing exactly, in every small way,
    As if the illusion were really quite right.”
    Poetic Universe

    I would hope this kind of imaginative response to questions in a philosophy thread could have its place in the 'Philosophy Writing Challenge - June 2025'. Given a context and background, I don't see why not... @Moliere @PoeticUniverse your thoughts?

    It seems spontaneous and contains humour.
    Excerpt:

    Space-time energy is doomed to entropic anihilation ; so where did our limited supply come from?
    — Gnomon

    Heck if I know; I'm on vacation…

    To the Ends of the Universe: A Cosmic Road Trip

    The Departure

    I took a road trip through the universe recently,
    Rolled down the windows of my consciousness,
    Cranked up some space-time tunes real loud—
    The cosmic background radiation was a bit repetitive.

    Holy-moly, what an inhospitable joint!
    Forget about finding a decent truck stop
    Or even a patch of habitable space.
    I’d rather be stuck in rush hour in Melbourne.
    Poetic Universe

    It is a form of stimulus and response. A musical dance of ideas providing a different perspective.
    It is art and it is meaningful. It is part of the bigger process where a single philosophical question can inspire and spark others...

    What do others think? Is poetry over the boundary lines? Should it just be used as support for a philosophical point? Or what...

    Poetic expression is allowed if it completes or supports the philosophical exploration.Moliere
  • Moliere
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    My thought is the difference is mostly about structure and effort -- we make posts about an idea but they only need to be somewhat related to philosophy to be A-OK, whereas the essay should somehow complete a thought. Whereas a thread is a conversation starter an essay is intentionally written by an author to express a particular thought for a reader.

    But, mostly, I don't see being too picky about what really makes the difference, and with respect to fiction/poetry etc.:

    I would hope this kind of imaginative response to questions in a philosophy thread could have its place in the 'Philosophy Writing Challenge - June 2025'.Amity

    I also don't see the benefit of being too picky in defining which is what when.

    Since the idea is to explore ideas together for fun and exercise, and there's not any prize at the end, I'm not too concerned with a firm set of criteria. Insofar that the participants are putting in an effort I don't see ruling out something because it's using fiction or because it's using poetry -- Wittgenstein, Heidegger, and other philosophers being prime examples of people who use a poetic expression or create whole new words even in order to pursue a point.

    The guideline is there to help differentiate what makes this different more than provide a set of rules by which something will or will not be accepted. Someone could even make a point in the threads, for instance, if they feel a particular entry is too poetic/fiction based or something -- I see more value in reflecting on that on the boards than defining it ahead of time.
  • Amity
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    The guideline is there to help differentiate what makes this different more than provide a set of rules by which something will or will not be accepted. Someone could even make a point in the threads, for instance, if they feel a particular entry is too poetic/fiction based or something -- I see more value in reflecting on that on the boards than defining it ahead of time.Moliere

    Exactly this. :up:

    the idea is to explore ideas together for fun and exerciseMoliere

    Yup! :cool:
    Looking forward to the diversity...
  • Arcane Sandwich
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    I've got an idea for a short article. I'll probably participate.
  • Jack Cummins
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    I can see the point about the difference between a thread and an essay. The author would probably need to be putting across a thought or view. There probably needs to be a certain amount of openness to varying forms of expression in the spirit of creativity. As @Amity says Iris Murdoch distinguishes between her fiction and non fiction. The possible forms of non fiction, as distinct from fiction, may include letters and autobiographical, or life writing, and some other forms.
  • Amity
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    The possible forms of non fiction, as distinct from fiction, may include letters and autobiographical, or life writing, and some other forms.Jack Cummins

    Yes. There are many forms to choose from. Previously:
    Philosophy Writing includes:
    Essays, Articles, Philosophical texts, Meditations, Personal narratives, Diaries, Memoirs, Correspondence, Letters, Lectures, and Contemporary criticism.

    ***
    Now, for a deeper dive into Literary Forms of Philosophy.
    A most fascinating and enlightening paper can be downloaded as pdf - 13 pages:

    https://www.semanticscholar.org/paper/PHILOSOPHY-IN-LITERARY-FORMS-Radovanovic/98ba2ae50574774d07f8b1445f073569bd1389d6

    The different forms:
    2.1 Poetic
    2.2 Dramatic - dialogues
    2.3 Prose
    2.3.1 Letters and Epistles
    2.3.2 Philosophical Essays
    2.4 Literary-Philosophical Genres of the Enlightenment
    2.5 Literary Forms of Existentialism
    2.5.1. On Existentialism
    2.5.2. Undefined Genre
    2.5.3. A Novel and a Novella

    Concluding Word
    ... literary forms are legitimate forms of exposition in philosophy. Such works, in addition to reflectively valuable content, possess artistic value, as well. The works of the most eminent philosophers, such as Parmenides, Plato, Pascal, Nietzsche, Sartre, and others, bear witness to that.B. Radovanovic

    ***
    An excerpt

    2.5.1. On Existentialism

    A philosophical treatise is often not an adequate form of expression to critically examine the situation of an individual and offer an answer to life's questions, crises, and quandaries. It turns out that a purely literary expression is particularly suitable for considering problems of an individual's life, which is evident precisely in existentialist philosophy. This is the reason for the frequent use of the novel form in existential philosophy. The very fact that certain philosophers of existence were also important authors affected the diffusion and popularity of this movement. In the process of its expansion and development, the philosophy of existence, having gathered a greater momentum and elan, is called existentialism. Major representatives of existentialism in philosophy are Søren Kierkegaard, Karl Jaspers, Martin Heidegger, Jean-Paul Sartre, and Albert Camus.
    B. Radovanovic

    There is more about Sartre and Camus in 2.5.3.
    Interesting that they both received the Nobel Prize for Literature. Sartre in 1964 and Camus...

    For his literary production inspired by the issues of human conscience, in 1957, as the second youngest laureate, he received the Nobel Prize for literature. Although many theoreticians place him among the existentialists, he refused to accept that he belongs to this orientation, as well as to any ideology and trend in thinking. Camus’ most well-known works are novels The Stranger/L'Étranger, The Plague/La Peste and essays The Myth of Sisyphus/Le Mythe de Sisyphe and The Rebel/L'Homme révolté.
    Given the topics that his works deal with, as well as the need to speak about the topical
    issues of human existence and the absurdity of life using widely accepted forms of narration, a philosopher and a writer Albert Camus opted for expounding his philosophical ideas entirely through literary prose.
    B. Radovanovic
  • Amity
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    I've got an idea for a short article. I'll probably participate.Arcane Sandwich
    :up: :cool:
    Maravilloso! Nuffink quite like the scent of inspiration in the morning...or any other time.
    Does the writing mood just strike when it likes or does one have to practise at certain times?
    I guess it depends on the individual's way of life...or philosophy...
  • Amity
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    Talking about Articles as an expression of philosophical ideas and a source of inspiration, here is one written by Seán Radcliffe.

    It won him the 2023 Irish Young Philosopher Awards Grand Prize and Philosopher of Our Time Award. He is now studying Mathematics and Economics at Trinity College, Dublin, where is he also an active member of the University Philosophical Society.

    Reading an assortment of articles can give you an idea of how to write one. Not only the how but the what. Themes or topics that grab your attention, inspire and make you and others want to know more.
    The Philosophy Now online magazine offers 4 for free, each month.

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    Excerpts to illustrate clear writing, exposition, hypothesis, questions and a conclusion:

    Plato’s Cave & Social Media
    Seán Radcliffe asks, has Plato’s Allegory of the Cave been warning us of social media for 2,400 years?

    The ‘Allegory of the Cave’ is a Socratic argument recorded by the Greek philosopher Plato, a student of Socrates, and the writer of The Republic (c.375 BCE), which contains a dialogue between Socrates and Plato’s brother Glaucon. [...]

    In many ways, social media can be seen as a modern day version of the cave. We are bombarded with information, opinions, and images that are carefully curated by algorithms and presented to us on a screen. Like the prisoners in the cave, we can become trapped in the limited perspective this engenders, mistaking the shadows presented to us for the real thing. These shadows thus represent the fake news, conspiracy theories, and propaganda that is spread by social media.
    [...]

    However, the question remains: Will we ever know what is real in the age of social media? [...]

    At the heart of this inquiry lies the paradox of perception and knowledge: How can we know what is real when our perceptions are inherently subjective and fallible? Most philosophers think that reality exists independently of our perceptions, and that we can come to know it through reason and empirical investigation. Others contend that reality is nothing more than our subjective experiences, and still others, that we can never truly know what is real. I believe that we need to recognise the interdependence of perception and knowledge. [...]

    The creators of social media apps have essentially built a cave for us, and we seem to have submitted to its chains. We often rely on what we see on social media or news outlets without investigating the truth behind it. The Allegory thus points out the importance of having a critical approach to the information we receive, in order to have a more accurate understanding of reality.

    In conclusion, Plato’s Allegory of the Cave provides a compelling analogy, and warning, for the dangers of social media. It highlights how social media can create a distorted sense of reality, reinforce existing biases, influence us through external forces, lead to addiction, and disconnect individuals from reality. So while social media can be a powerful tool for communication and connection, it is important to be aware of its limitations and the potential for it to distort our perceptions. By looking at the whole picture, and by drawing on the lessons of the Allegory of the Cave’s reverse form of ontology, we can begin to navigate the complexities, even jeopardies, of social media, and work towards a more informed and enlightened understanding of the world.
    Plato's Cave and Social Media - Issue 165 - Philosophy Now
    [emphasis added]

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    In writing and submitting an essay or article or piece of philosophy writing:

    Note the importance of a Title:

    It is the reader's first impression. It captures attention.
    It communicates the main idea. It condenses and relates to the content.
    It is an intriguing guide, leading to what...?
    It shows the care and creativity of the author.

    https://www.oxbridgeessays.com/blog/how-to-title-an-essay/

    From: https://thephilosophyforum.com/discussion/comment/949836

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    The philosopher Plato and his inventive myths/stories echoing down the ages...

    The Cave, the narrative that occurs in the Republic (514a–517a), is a fantastical story, but it does not deal explicitly with the beyond (the distant past, life after death etc.), and is thus different from the traditional myths Plato uses and the myths he invents. Strictly speaking, the Cave is an analogy, not a myth. Also in the Republic, Socrates says that until philosophers take control of a city “the politeia whose story we are telling in words (muthologein) will not achieve its fulfillment in practice” (501e2–5; translated by Rowe (1999, 268)).

    The construction of the ideal city may be called a “myth” in the sense that it depicts an imaginary polis (cf. 420c2: “We imagine the happy state”). In the Phaedrus (237a9, 241e8) the word muthos is used to name “the rhetorical exercise which Socrates carries out” (Brisson 1998, 144), but this seems to be a loose usage of the word.
    Plato's Myths - SEP

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    Continuing thoughts on philosophy and literature. And the question of hypocrisy in Plato.
    A 20 min podcast by Peter Adamson:
    Plato criticized both the epic poetry of Homer and Hesiod, and the tragic and comic poets. Yet he invented myths of his own. So what was his attitude towards literature and myth? Peter tackles this question in a final episode on Plato.Plato, Poetry and Myth - History of Philosophy without any gaps
  • Moliere
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    I can see the point about the difference between a thread and an essay. The author would probably need to be putting across a thought or view. There probably needs to be a certain amount of openness to varying forms of expression in the spirit of creativity. As Amity says Iris Murdoch distinguishes between her fiction and non fiction. The possible forms of non fiction, as distinct from fiction, may include letters and autobiographical, or life writing, and some other forms.Jack Cummins

    I'm certainly of the opinion that openness is the selling point for participation. I have no intent on refusing any submissions, for instance. I'm trying to give just enough structure to guide creative thought without hemming people in too much.

    And my intent is to respond to every submission in a non-critical style -- i.e. I'll read the essay and try to take its own terms without importing my own thoughts, and try to offer pointers to clean up the essay.

    Sweet! For thems who already write philosophy essays or have submitted them to journals I'd say that this offers an opportunity for your more experimental side to receive feedback -- things you know just won't publish but that you're interested in.
  • Amity
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    I'm certainly of the opinion that openness is the selling point for participation. I have no intent on refusing any submissions, for instance. I'm trying to give just enough structure to guide creative thought without hemming people in too much.Moliere

    Yes. For this activity to work and be an enjoyable exercise for all, there is a need for flexibility. The guidelines reflect that, at the same time as giving structure e.g. word limits and advice. Like:

    10) Members please carefully read the essays before offering thoughtful feedback. A more open-ended conversation will take place in the 'Meet the Authors' thread that will be created on June 15th.Moliere

    The issue of how to give, receive and respond to feedback is important to consider.
    What kind of 'feedback' is being sought by authors? Comments will vary according to individual experience, taste and confidence. The content and tone - is it about the writing style, format or ideas?
    Is it to be more of a conversational questioning, a criticism or review? All of the above?

    And my intent is to respond to every submission in a non-critical style -- i.e. I'll read the essay and try to take its own terms without importing my own thoughts, and try to offer pointers to clean up the essay.Moliere

    Like you, I intend to respond to every submission as in the Literary Activity. However, for me. I think this philosophy event will require a different style and way of reading/thinking. Tougher. We will see.

    I don't know what you mean by not 'importing your own thoughts' when reading. I read as if in dialogue with the author, trying to understand. This means an engagement of 'self' - thoughts and background.
    And, me being me, I tend not to offer 'pointers to clean up' but know that others do this really well.
    Authors, I think, appreciate that their writing is being given careful consideration.
    I suppose, even a line or two is better than complete silence.

    If I am unsure or confused, I stop and ask questions rather than make assumptions and dismiss.
    It's a great opportunity for both parties to learn.
    It will be interesting to see how we each respond to 'criticism'. Some find it easier than others.

    Above all, the authors should be respected and given encouragement. Harsh criticism should not destroy someone's creative spirit.

    For thems who already write philosophy essays or have submitted them to journals I'd say that this offers an opportunity for your more experimental side to receive feedback -- things you know just won't publish but that you're interested in.Moliere

    Yes. I think that is what some will find a challenge. And why I think the anonymity appeals. It's like novelists publishing under a different pen-name to try out a different genre.

    I hope to be surprised at the Reveal! :cool:
  • Amity
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    I have a question as to the creative aspects and ways of an 'essay' as an 'attempt' to share ideas.

    Can we include more than just writing? Writing on the wall is art. Art is textual. Intertextuality.

    Can we take advantage of the fact that this is online and use images to illustrate the meanings within?

    Also, I remember that some feedback in some of the stories used AI or photographs to give a sense of how the writing affected the reader. How their imagination was captured.

    @Nils Loc springs immediately to mind. His creations lifted the words to another level. It enlivened.[*]
    I guess the same thing can be done with music and YouTube. To see and hear the connections.
    Perhaps, that is going too far...but Images are important. Visuals in philosophy to envisage visions.

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    [*] Feedback to @hypericin's short story, Three Shittyass Ghosts:
    https://thephilosophyforum.com/discussion/comment/761686

    To my own Red, White and Blue:
    https://thephilosophyforum.com/discussion/comment/831978

    To @180 Proof's Duct Tape:
    https://thephilosophyforum.com/discussion/comment/833309

    From Jamal to @Jamal's In the Wake of the Moriscos:
    https://thephilosophyforum.com/discussion/comment/764324
    following @javi2541997's:
    https://thephilosophyforum.com/discussion/comment/761827
  • Jack Cummins
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    While usage of linked sources and images may be an expansion of creativity, there is the question of how far this could go. If linked information is overused the essay could end up constituting a book and be time consuming if readers were expected to read too many links.

    Also, regarding images, it is possible that it could turn the essay more into an art competition. It is also does depend on software for all of this. I am certainly not wishing to be negative and say that links and art should be avoided. However, if there is an expectation to include these, it could make it complicated.

    People have varying amounts of time to commit to the activity, even though it several months away. Of course, all sources, even quotes, would need to be acknowledged in order to avoid plagiarism. There is also the question as to whether a bibliography is or not included and this may depend on the form which the author chooses. There is also the question whether links and images would be an aspect of appreciation of the 'essays' or detract from the writing itself. It may be that each person has to navigate this and make choices rather than guidelines being too prescriptive.
  • Amity
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    While usage of linked sources and images may be an expansion of creativity, there is the question of how far this could go. If linked information is overused the essay could end up constituting a book and be time consuming if readers were expected to read too many links.Jack Cummins

    Yes. This kind of creative intrusion will certainly not always enhance the writing.
    But I think some authors/readers might appreciate a few links, even if they are added at the end as references.

    Hah, no books please, we're British! Well yeah, thank goodness for the maximum 5,000 word limit. I tend to read the short ones first.
    There is no expectation of readers doing anything so tiring. We have our own limits. I think mine will be tested.

    Also, regarding images, it is possible that it could turn the essay more into an art competition. It is also does depend on software for all of this. I am certainly not wishing to be negative and say that links and art should be avoided. However, if there is an expectation to include these, it could make it complicated.Jack Cummins

    Again, no expectation that this is even desired, never mind included.
    The emphasis will always be on the writing. It should be clear and not cluttered. It was just one of my morning meanderings. Thanks for responding.

    People have varying amounts of time to commit to the activity, even though it several months away. Of course, all sources, even quotes, would need to be acknowledged in order to avoid plagiarism. There is also the question as to whether a bibliography is or not included and this may depend on the form which the author chooses. There is also the question whether links and images would be an aspect of appreciation of the 'essays' or detract from the writing itself. It may be that each person has to navigate this and make choices rather than guidelines being too prescriptive.Jack Cummins

    It is always good practice to reference quotes. This can be done in-text without need for a biography or list at end. The latter is, as you say, up to the author. And I think such would not be included in the word count @Moliere but in-text would?

    In general, the focus is on the writing. Most will do that. If a few people are inspired to include feedback with links or images to show appreciation or clarify, then whatever works.

    I think @Moliere has made his intentions and the aims of this event clear.
    It's still good to talk.Thanks!
  • Moliere
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    And I think such would not be included in the word count Moliere but in-text would?Amity


    I wouldn't count it.
  • Moliere
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    I don't want people to worry about the rules too, too much. I'm mostly hoping to hear from many contributors who are stretching their creative sides and trying out something new, insofar that they are enjoying themselves.

    One of the reasons I thought this a fun activity is I like to read other people's thoughts, no matter what they are thinking.
  • Moliere
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    Though it occurs to me -- if anyone who is lukewarm on participation because they want more guidelines then please say something.

    We can come up with more guidelines together if that's necessary for participation.
  • Amity
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    I don't want people to worry about the rules too, too much. I'm mostly hoping to hear from many contributors who are stretching their creative sides and trying out something new, insofar that they are enjoying themselves [...]

    if anyone who is lukewarm on participation because they want more guidelines then please say something.
    We can come up with more guidelines together if that's necessary for participation.
    Moliere

    :smile: :cool:

    I think most will appreciate the inclusive and welcoming approach taken.
    I understand the desire for rule flexibility so as to encourage maximum participation.
    Also, the slight 'push' to 'stretch' creative aspects. To try something different. Perhaps approaching a familiar topic from another perspective or using a 'new' form.

    Until now, I have been somewhat guilty of a focus on literary philosophy.

    I have ideas for this event but have yet to work out content and most interesting form. I'm motivated and enthused as to the choice available. I tend to the more 'artistic'...ahem! Playful.

    Having said that, perhaps I need to return to something more academic. To exercise parts once excised or exorcised. To limber up and improve skills, I would need to read some rules or specific guidance.

    I'm reminded of a post from the original thread:

    I probably wouldn't write one, my essay skills have yet to evolve from early grade school (Paragraph 1: Introduction; Paragraphs 2 - 4: Three supporting reasons, Paragraph 5: Conclusion). Former English teacher once said to me: "Everything to write about has already been written, there is nothing new, only clever rehashing." He teaches philosophy at a major-ish university, last I was aware. I'm sure a few people here more intrepid than I could give him a run for his money, however. It'd be nice to see what gets submitted, that's for sure.
    [my emphasis]

    I despair when I read this kind of message. It discourages rather than encourages creativity.
    Of course, the same topics or themes have been discussed and written about. Aspects of human life in a world with all its questions...values, how best to live, love, etc.

    However, this is about the individual and what is 'new' to them. How it appears and how experience can be shared. There is always something new. It's all in the eyes and view.

    It is also about combining the past, present and future. So, there is the example essay I posted earlier:
    Plato’s Cave & Social Media
    Seán Radcliffe asks, has Plato’s Allegory of the Cave been warning us of social media for 2,400 years?
    from: https://philosophynow.org/issues/165/Platos_Cave_and_Social_Media

    It is an imaginative way to reach something original for the author. And perhaps the reader.
    There is a freshness. We can be unusual...

    ***

    To return to academia and rules. From one of my earlier posts:

    I think it would be good for both beginners and the more experienced.
    To be challenged in ways other than writing in a thread. This would give people a chance to be creative and test themselves against others. Or simply for own enjoyment. That I would love to read :sparkle:

    For revision, if needed! Or if other ways are better, suggestions welcome :up:

    How to Read Philosophy
    https://philosophy.tamucc.edu/texts/pryor-guidelines-on-reading-philosophy

    How to Write Philosophy
    Includes 7 links - one pdf by the highly recommended Pryor.
    https://philosophy.tamucc.edu/resources/writing

    I will see. Do I really need to go back there to student days? What, if anything, is there to prove?

    It will be wonderful if people who are reluctant to participate, because of previous discouragement, would find the joy in self-expression. Everyone's voice is important. Let it out, be fearless! Take the leap! :fire:
  • Amity
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    A personal anecdote. My first academic essay.

    Once upon a time...
    In't days before t'internet.
    In an institution preparing students to be teachers.
    Write an essay on:
    I can't remember the title.
    But it had something to do with education. Perhaps, it ended with 'Discuss'.

    I was woefully ignorant of 'How to Write an Essay' with all its criteria and standards.
    No Guidelines were offered. Imagine that!

    So, I duly wrote my thoughts on the subject, thinking that was what was required.
    So, wrong! Low marks. Ouch! We don't want to hear your views. Oh, Oh-Kay...

    I had worried about using other people's words. Concerned about 'copying', I thought it was cheating.
    My new friend, educated at a private school, knew better.
    So, I read her prize-winning essay. And was shocked to find a host of quotes, strung together by a few personal thoughts.

    It is only when you know what the tutors/examiners are looking for that you can write accordingly.
    To fit the bill and pass with flying colours. I learned the lesson.
    You gotta know the structure, especially in philosophy. You gotta read and read to get a sense of what is good writing. Reflect and analyse. To recognise the need to be clear and keep to the point. To support your views and arguments by using relevant quotes. And so on...

    The experienced, here, all know that. And I hope they will submit. And not just see this event as something trivial. This is important to widen perspectives and stretch the reader's ability to understand.
    And if confused, to feel confident to ask. Curious questioning an' all that jazz!
  • Amity
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    The experienced, here, all know that. And I hope they will submit.Amity

    To @Moliere
    I'll leave it here, for now. I've said more than enough. Don't want to bore the pants off everybody.
    I hope that we hear from other voices, as yet silent. :sparkle:

    One of the reasons I thought this a fun activity is I like to read other people's thoughts, no matter what they are thinking.Moliere

    Yup! :up:
  • RussellA
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    Hello and welcome to the Philosophy Writing Challenge - June 2025.Moliere

    Really great to see this challenge up and running.Amity

    I appreciate your initiative and the opportunity to take part.
  • Amity
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    I appreciate your initiative and the opportunity to take part.RussellA

    Hi there. It's so good to hear this, thank you!

    We're not allowed to talk specifics...

    5) Submissions are to be anonymous. Don't advertise what you've written.Moliere

    ....but...do you have something in mind already?


    Right now, my mind is on the chaotic side of clarity. Ideas floating around, one bubble after another.

    Best wishes with whatever you decide. :up: :flower:
  • RussellA
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    ....but...do you have something in mind already?Amity

    I have a content in mind, but I want to learn how to express this content within the format of a formal philosophical essay.

    The content is one thing, but the form of of a philosophical essay is another thing, and it is the formal structure of a philosophical essay that interests me at the moment. The Philosophical Writing Challenge is a perfect opportunity to try to work out how to structure a philosophical essay.

    As Peter Horban wrote in Writing a Philosophy Paper, a philosophical essay is not an exercise in literary self-expression, a report of of what various scholars have said about a topic or a presentation of one's personal beliefs, but is a reasoned defence of a thesis.

    But how exactly does one give a reasoned defence of a thesis?

    How does one structure a reasoned defence?

    As you indicated, this in part requires working out where exactly is the boundary between presenting one's personal belief in the validity of a thesis and giving a reasoned defence of one's personal belief in the validity of a thesis.
  • Wayfarer
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    My advice would be to start with a concise paragraph expressing the point of the essay. Then sketch out headings and sub-headings, representing the progressive stages of building the argument and the steps required to establish each step. That step of building level 1, 2 and 3 headings is often helpful in structuring your content.

    Also consider likely objections and your counter to them.

    End with a conclusion which should state the paragraph you started with but now as a conclusion based on the preceding paragraphs.
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